Attempt Number2

This piece is vibrant and fresh. The royal blue and hot pink make a great combo, and the dash of green sweeps across the middle to restore balance. Again, I think that you do a wonderful job of keeping the eye occupied and there is just enough movement to keep you interested in seeing more.

The coloring technique could use a little work, but overall is clean and consistent, nothing that a little practice and refinement can't fix. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Sharpies can be quite fickle and will turn on you without warning. You just have to be able to spot when they get quirky and adjust for their temperment and bleed. Learning how to color with them smoothly takes time and extreme patience.

Your abstract lines work very well with bold colors. Once you have mastered the flat fill, experimenting with shading will be a real treat. Wonderful job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>